Monday, December 18, 2006

Hmmm...

Deewaaron par kyon soonapan hai
Parchhai bhi kuch sehmi si lagi hai
Jala dalo inko bhi zara tum
Akele baitthe ho yun shamma ke tale

Jis kagaz mein mod bahut hain
Kyun uspar yun likhva rahe ho
Samundar mein bhi lehren utthkar
Sambhal jaati hain saahil ke tale

Kuch to hai jo chhupa rahe ho
Kya koi khwaab saja rahe ho?
Aankhen paani tab hoti hain
Khulti hon jab maazi ke tale

Kya in baaton mein tum meri
Apni jhalak pehchaan rahe ho?
Shayad kahani yeh hai tumhari
Mere in lafzon ke tale...

6 comments:

Aashriya said...

damn gud yaar..u surprise me..coz i mean its u and its such gud writin..surprise surprise all the time:P..but srsly..u knw its bloody gud..i rly like it.. keep em comin:)

surrendering to reality said...

@ aashi

thank u:) n dont let the secret out..sshh...i no english ok!

heh? ok said...

pehle bhi bola...lovely hai. soothing bhi hai, strangely. welcome to blogdom, my friend! and we have the same template, apparently.

surrendering to reality said...

@ sangy

hehe hanji iv copied urs :P thanks:)

RIESHA said...

hey this is really sweet poem....
dont shout on me.. cuz m gonna copy urz..
amazing..u muz have used it wen u woke up late(remembah wat r v talkin' abt)..
loadz ov l;uv
keep writing!!

surrendering to reality said...

@ risha

lol...yea thanks :)