Monday, December 18, 2006

Aazaad

suraj ki kirno se jalte
hawaon ki aanchal mein jhoome
kuch sookhe patte idhar udhar
sarhad ki seema mein ghoome

woh ek masiah surkh patton ko
sunata raha apni kahani
woh ek masiah basti basti
mitaata raha maazi ki nishani

ek nadi ja mili sagar mein
na dekha palat ke na kiya ishara
yun fiza chali idhar bhi udhar bhi
phir bhi soona zameen ka nazara

sarhad pe suna hai kal bhi
hui thi ahat, chali thi goli
na saaz alag na awaz dhali thi
kuch bacchon ki maae roi thin

aaj hawa kuch tez chali hai
woh sukhe patte phir jhoom utthe hain
beeti yaadein sama kar dil mein
na is paar na us paar gire hain

7 comments:

heh? ok said...

hmm....freedom from what exactly? intriguing

Aashriya said...

again its fab..i love the words,like i can visualise it,u know what i mean?..love it!..like i said, keep at it:)

surrendering to reality said...

@ sangy

thats the point :) neither here nor there...in a sense then freedom frm boundaries n borders

surrendering to reality said...

@ aashi

thanks :)

heh? ok said...

acha....me slow with poetry. my bad.

Red said...

love it.. who knew you had such depth..

surrendering to reality said...

@ jitangalie

hehe thanks:)